7IsUnlucky's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[jump and die]

Pretty good.

- Pros -
Nice, smooth animation.
- Cons -
Could have had better music.
= Suggestions =
I think using the line tool works best for animating sticks.

mraznbuddy responds:

"I think using the line tool works best for animating sticks."
that make a lot of sense lol. but i dont get how to go it. like when i always try the lines dont join together TT_TT i need a tutorial on it

[( O N E )]

Just a short loop.

- Pros -
Nice animation and good music.
- Cons -
Not much to it.
= Suggestions =
Make an actual movie instead of a short five second loop.

RedHotPoker responds:

But real movies are hard.

[M & B Time Lapse]

Very good!

- Pros -
Nice art style and music.
- Cons -
Kind of jerky stopmotion.
= Suggestions =
Make it smoother and make more time lapses!

DrSkippy responds:

OK I will do. I upped the frame rate to 12 this time rather then 9. if i up it any more it will be shorter.

[.:The Art Of Stopmotion:]

Nice!

- Pros -
Good music and very entertaining.
- Cons -
None.
= Suggestions =
Perfect movies don't need suggestions.

bd1000 responds:

Pfff it's not perfect.
Godlike at the most .

[FC Simonwuzere Vs WhiteS]

Nice use of filters.

- Pros -
Great art & animation and good music.
- Cons -
None.
= Suggestions =
Draw your own guns instead of just taking them from the internet.

simonwuzere responds:

Actually The Gun was drawn

[Making the Band part 1]

It's alright.

- Pros -
Fairly good animation and pretty funny.
- Cons -
A bit too short.
= Suggestions =
Make it longer.

bobsmovie responds:

Cheers. :)

[Afro N' Graham 01]

Not so good

- Pros -
Very nice music in the intro.
- Cons -
Annoying voices and bad animation.
= Suggestions =
Learn to animate better and get better voice actors.

kinggila responds:

"Learn to animate better and get better voice actors."

No.

[Cute Chocobo Time Lapse]

Good.

- Pros -
Nice art and good music.
- Cons -
A bit jerky.
= Suggestions =
Make it a bit smoother.

DrSkippy responds:

It is nearly impossible to smooth a timelapse but ill try! thx! XD

[ML: Sign of the Cross]

Interesting

- Pros -
Nice song.
- Cons -
No actual art.
= Suggestions =
Actually draw stuff instead of just using images.

Ivaron responds:

I see how it might look like I took the easy way out, but I think the images added to the humor and creativy (creativity as in finding the right pictures to respresent things).

[Mega Man ZX Model Trouble]

A bit mediocre

- Pros -
It has pretty good art & animation.
- Cons -
Too short.
= Suggestions =
Make it a bit longer and funnier.

Shadowii2 responds:

I know it's a little short, but thanks anyway