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[Madness Neurosis Collab 3]

Ehh

+{Pros}+
Fairly good animation in most places
-{Cons}-
You didn't make your own sprites most of the time.
={Suggestions}=
Take out that shit about me you liar. Also I'm not 11.
>{Overall}<
Eh I think I'll each one of you (constructive) criticism on your part

Preloader game - Kinda jerky animation :/

LLL - Your part had fairly good animation, but diego's dancing looked really weird and freddy's dancing was the same as in neurosis 2.

YK-Blaze - Your part was fairly good, but it had no sound. You fix that.

Smotez - Nice animation, but his walking was way too fucking slow and it was too dark.

PlatinumX9 - Your part was very, very bad. First of all, the enemy's heads didnt fall all the way to the ground. Secondly, when he turns around he just suddenly flips so he's facing the other way. WTF??? And also LLL what the fuck did you do to his head???

Slipz (or whoever the hell it was made by) - The animation went waaaay too fast. Also when he jumped he left behind one of his hands and feet DX

YK-Blaze - The animation was smooth, but he just stood still when he was shooting.

Dood Faic - Very nice, smooth animation, but the guys shouldn't just stand still like that.

Delta - Nice animation, and I like the one-foot walking style, but you should add teh chainsaw sounds. Also the walking at the end was too fast.

Slipz - The animation was OK, but quite jerky. Also you should use a folder for each character, not just a layer.

Worrow(i think) - The animation in your part was quite smooth; I'm surprised you didn't get co. Also I like the ending :P

DayDayX - The animation was okay, but why do you put so much shading on your characters???

Daveb0t - Your part was VERY nice. The animation is very smooth and it doesn't go too slow or too fast. But I you should seriously rethink the proportions of the characters.

DJTrickyM - The animation was alright for four months of experience, but when the guys come onto the screen they just appear out of nowhere. Fix that.

I don't know who this part was by, but it was fairly nice. Though the animation and graphics could use a bit of work. Also the people were way too big.

YK-Blaze - Not as good as your other parts. The animation was quite choppy.

Alpha Nuva(first part) - Very nice animation, probably the best in the collab, but only 1 kill in 20 seconds??? WTF!

Alpha Nuva(second part) - Pretty nice but whats with teh flashy bg? Also I got the secret message XD

Overall, a pretty nice movie, but platinum's part shouldn't be allowed in.

2/5

LittleLuckyLink responds:

You are calling me a liar? How dare you. You came into my collab, acted like you were the best thing on the face of the earth, managed to piss off more than enough members of my collab to get you kicked out.
The only thing that isn't true is that you are 11, but you are still just barely 12.

And I thought this review would be all hate and flames because you got kicked out, I am glad that you were able to give nice constructive criticism, I am also glad that you (hopefully, probably) moved on with your life. Also impressed how you took the time to review each part.

Oh on a final note, yes I took the freddy dance from my last movie, and the Diego dance was actually a first test for tweening madness.

[Evolution of the Unicorn]

Wow

+{Pros}+
Fantabulous art and animation.
+{Cons}+
Eh none.
={Suggestions}=
Perhaps make it a bit longer?
>{Overall}<
A great and very smooth video.
And nateman, i think you should go fuck yourself, because this is actually quite amazing.
5/5 and fav'd

[Explosion Collab]

Meh

+{Pros}+
Fairly good art in most places
-{Cons}-
Pretty bad animation actually
={Suggestions}=
Get some better animators
>{Overall}<
Tis meh. Pretty good explosions though.
And the music isn't just "you fail" music, it's by the trans-siberian orchestra.
2/5

[Lemon Demon's "Bad Idea"]

EXCELLENT

+{Pros}+
Outstanding art, and the fbf is the best I've ever seen. Also very realistic movement.
-{Cons}-
None :)
={Suggestions}=
Eh none.
>{Overall}<
An excellently animated movie, and nice song Trapezoid. You should make more like this.
5/5

[Salad Fingers Karaoke]

Best. Ever.

+{Pros}+
Excellent song and animation and nice job recreating David Firth's art style.
-{Cons}-
You didn't use the whole song :(
={Suggestions}=
Perfect now go and make SF Karaoke TWO!!!!!!
>{Overall}<
An excellent movie, but sorry about your color blindness. >_>
5/5

MiddleFingerRings responds:

Thanks, I don't have much time at the moment, and I'm in between a lot of projects, but don't worry, a sequel will be made eventually.

[WRAITH Preview]

Best. Ever.

+{Pros}+
Fabulous animation, some of the best I've ever seen.
-{Cons}-
Short, but it's only a preview, so ya don't want to give too much away.
={Suggestions}=
None
>{Overall}<
Wow. I'm certainly impressed. You are without doubt THE BEST madness animator I have ever seen. Yes, even better than Krinkels.
And when is this coming out? I really look forward to it.
5/5

[Madness Arena]

Great!

+{Pros}+
Excellent animation
-{Cons}-
Much too short
={Suggestions}=
Make it a LOT longer
>{Overall}<
Excellent, but 24 fps? That seems rather slow for madness, but even so, you made it look as smooth as can be for madness.
But generally for madness, I recommend 33 fps.
5/5

[All Your Bean]

LOLOLOL

+{Pros}+
LOL FUNNEHEST THING EVER
-{Cons}-
Meh kinda crappy animation u can do better
={Suggestions}=
None
>{Overall}<
Funniest. Thing. Ever.
5/5

["POOP"]

okay?

+{Pros}+
Good animation
-{Cons}-
WAY TOO FUCKING WEIRD LOL
={Suggestions}=
It should be longer and less wierder lol wierder
>{Overall}<
teh meh
3/5

[Madness: I Am Wade Fulp]

Lol

+{Pros}+
Nice animation and lol @ the easter egg u can drag his head lololol
-{Cons}-
TOO SHORT
={Suggestions}=
MAKE IT LONGER
>{Overall}<
GOOD
I LIKE ALL CAPS
4/5

NukeTheWhales responds:

Thanks for the review. I only really responded cause I didunt really liek you. But maybe that might change!