7IsUnlucky's game Reviews on Newgrounds

[Windows Doors]

Hm.

The reason it's white before the preloader, I believe, is because if you have any components in your Flash, it loads those before anything else.
I forgot the script to make it not do that

Archawn responds:

I know how to fix the problem, it's just that I have too many movieclips with linkage names to easily fix it.

[Snake For Dummies]

Mediocre

+{Pros}+
Well, the art was fairly nice.
-{Cons}-
You didn't even write your own code
={Suggestions}=
Learn Actionscript before making a game like this rather than just copying the code off a tutorial.
>{Overall}<
Better than a lot of nooby snake games, but that still doesn't change the fact that you copied and pasted the code.
2/ 5

thecoreman responds:

Unlike what most people think, i didn't copy/paste it, i wrote it myself with the help of tuts.

Thx for playing, anyway...

[Windows VIRUS]

Good.

+{Pros}+
Rather funny and a lot of programs to choose from.
-{Cons}-
Mediocre artwork.
={Suggestions}=
Get better artwork and credit me for the bg.
>{Overall}<
A fairly good Windows emulator. Nice that there are so many programs.
3/5

AndrewGlisson11 responds:

i did credit you for the bg, shut your computer down again and look at the credits, i credited you before i submitted this.

[Windows XL]

Alright.

+{Pros}+
Fairly nice graphics.
-{Cons}-
No sound.
={Suggestions}=
Add some sound.
>{Overall}<
A fairly good Windows Emulator. But the preloader doesn't actually work. You know why? Because you have to set the components to load in the same frame of the preloader. (They are automatically set to load on the second frame.) Go to gotoandlearn.com for more information.

Hal55 responds:

Yes that helped, I am now thinking of makeing Windows XL Pro :-)

[Twist]

Good!

+{Pros}+
Nice art and original concept.
-{Cons}-
Too hard!
={Suggestions}=
Make it a bit easier (e.g. make the one on left be controlled be WAS and D.)
>{Overall}<
A nice little game. Very hard, but otherwise very good.

itsjms responds:

Lol (Brain Teaser)

[W-I-G-G defender]

It's good.

- Pros -
Nice graphics.
- Cons -
It lags.
= Suggestions =
Make it lag less.

iamironman responds:

any sugestions on how to do this?

[*MINES*]

Good, I guess

- Pros -
Okay art.
- Cons -
You can't see the cursor!
= Suggestions =
Don't make the cursor the same color as the background.

TxZam responds:

thats the game!

[Beat the Jerk]

Bad. Like Pillow Fight 2007.

- Pros -
Good graphics.
- Cons -
You can't kill the guy!
= Suggestions =
Put more time and effort into it and make it so the guy is killable.

irrelivent responds:

Aw, one of my loyal fans I see. XD

[Advanced Flash Tutorial!]

Very nice!

- Pros -
Good art & graphics and great information.
- Cons -
The music only lasts a few minutes (thank god.)
= Suggestions =
Put in better music (e.g. techno. More people like techno than rock.) Also make the music loop. Do you know how? I'll tell you just in case you don't know. Go to the sound settings, and instead of having it repeat 1 or 0 times, select the drop down that says "repeat" and select loop. Took me a while to figure that one out.

Neo-13 responds:

Thanks for the enlightening review.
There were problems with the loop - the music kept overlapping itself every time you went back to the menu. So it is a little screwed up, sorry about that - I'm trying to fix it.

[Super Duper Dock Dressup]

Umm... what's Dock Division?

- Pros -
Pretty nice art and good music.
- Cons -
Too small.
= Suggestions =
Maybe make more items to dress up the dock division dudes with.

Imacow responds:

I probably should of added more things. But the thing I hate about dressup games is when there are a million items and it's impossible to find what you want.

Thanks for the review